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27 Jan 2012 05:02 am

yuugi

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Lawrence's hesitation seems to be enough of an answer.

New voting incentive at TWC, it's a drawing of Kenneth I've inked with a brush. Been practicing with it so expect more voting incentives done like this :>.

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27 Jan 2012 05:09 am

yuugi

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@chobi_chi: Hehe. He'll be back next chapter and it will be a long scene. Meanwhile there will be plenty of sketches of him, I promise :D!

@Hokova: Thanks, still have lots to practice with it but it's super fun.

@Malova: A lot more drama still to come :D.

@kriolynn: Lawrence is the king of regrets :P.

@Zenithlea: She's not angry or anything, it's a different kind of feeling. We'll see on the next pages :>.

@artificer urza: She's not angry, but she is feeling overwhelmed. She witnessed first hard how her sister hasn't let go of her husband despite all the years, so I suppose she has just realized it's the same for Lawrence.

@Realdandy: Ahaha, I can imagine Lawrence and Kenneth sitting in a bar discussing how it's impossible to talk with Beth.

@StrawberryZombieCake: She just found out Lawrence is still in love with his late wife so she's feeling awkward and overwhelmed with the whole situation, thus leaving the room.

@Mimi-Evelyn: I just started inking with a brush for fun and I'm already in love. Still have lots and lots to practice but wow, fuuun!!

@MilkMaidRum: You are free to judge her however you'd like, but just wait for the next pages. Beth isn't angry at Lawrence at all.

@Myriads of Blue: There's actually a reason why I didn't draw Beth's eyes, so just wait for the next pages.

@cutezombiefreak: Thanks, and about Beth I think you should just wait for the next pages :>.

@looru: Beth is not the monster she seems to be in here, just have to wait for the other pages. But yes, I do want her to be flawed, and I do want us to experience her growth as a character and person as she lives her story. So thank you very much for this comment :>!

@chickey: Thanks, I'm glad you like the characters! To be honest interesting characters are what make a story for me. And Beth isn't angry at Lawrence, her feelings and behavior will be more clear on the next pages and next chapter.

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27 Jan 2012 05:05 am

chobi_chi

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Yes. It's late. Go back, go back to Kenny! :D

I miss him! But the lovely picture will hold me over!

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27 Jan 2012 05:53 am

hokova (Guest)

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Ah hey,dont be sad. That happens to a lot of nonpeople.
Beth,give him a rest!

Btw I like the incentive,the brush rules:3

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27 Jan 2012 06:52 am

Malova

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I love the drama! I'm very curious about how he'll react when he finds out she has a fiance ^^

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27 Jan 2012 07:16 am

kriolynn

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bet he's regretting the whole Q&A thing. aww, i feel bad for him now. and Beth.

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27 Jan 2012 08:05 am

Zenithlea

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Hmm, you're pretty much right that I'm not sympathetic to her plight. (How can I be when I just sit in front of my computer grinning like an evil person at the current situation?)
After all, I'm currently rooting for Kenneth, so there. :D
Though, I have to say... "C'mon Beth, Lawrence is a hotti-er, good looking man. Can't expect a guy with his looks to not have been previously attached."

Love her stiff backed pose in the last panel, portrays the subtle anger(?) nicely.

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27 Jan 2012 09:05 am

artificer urza

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I hope she's leaving because things just got really awkward and not because she's angry at him or something. Then again, she does seem to be the type to take every perceived affront personally.

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27 Jan 2012 09:20 am

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My oh my, I understand both of their sides, Yet I think Beth is a bit difficult to find communication with in general! But as a girl I understand her feelings!

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27 Jan 2012 11:35 am

StrawberryZombieCake

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wait........what happened? Why is her panties in a snitch?

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27 Jan 2012 12:15 pm

Mimi-Evelyn

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ooh, you really burned him there, beth!

Also: Haaaaah!! Brush inking!@!@ I love brushes SO much, you're inking is always pretty wonderful but this feel special^^

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27 Jan 2012 12:38 pm

Mimi-Evelyn

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@yuugi: IKNOWRIGHT!? XD One's you're hooked there's no going back. Welcome to the clan!

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27 Jan 2012 01:50 pm

MilkMaidRum

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not liking this Beth person. wondering why she is so angry that a man still loves his late-wife. If he didn't, he'd be a pretty crummy person.

Beth is a brat.

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27 Jan 2012 03:05 pm

Myriads of Blue

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Why so cold Beth, you think people just forget about the ones they love like that? It's not like she left him, or the relationship didn't work out.

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27 Jan 2012 05:50 pm

cutezombiefreak

gahh...

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I'm sorry even though she's still young. She's very childish, spoiled and whiny. /: Seems she only thinks for herself than other's.

Other than that, very well drawn and good job. ^^ Like the comic so far!

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27 Jan 2012 06:42 pm

looru

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Actually I think this is a rather nice development of things. It shows her faults and potential to grow as a character later on, and that goes for Lawrence as well. :)

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28 Jan 2012 07:49 am

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Maybe the thought of Lawrence ever having had another woman in his life probably didn't occur to Beth, and now that she knows, she's disappointed, and so shocked that she's expressing it by immediately distancing herself. She may regret her behaviour later on when she looks back on it. It does kind of look like she's angry though, and Lawrence probably thinks she is. I love all the complex characters in this story, it's great~ :)

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